I was born on the on the first month of the year, what a great way to start off the year right?
I have loved and felt loved. Many people have made an impression on my life and I will never forget those who have been there for me and the family members I lost I will always keep them in my heart.
My little sister, the highlight of my day, brings smiles to my face every single day. I just hope that when she grows up that I set the right example for her for I know she loves to copy everything that I do.
I believe everything is meant to happen for a reason, people change for the better and we all learn from our mistakes one way or another.
My best friend, such a patient young heart, means everything to me and I just cannot picture my life without him. We are two different people that handle life in totally different ways, but get along so well. Opposites attract right?
I plan to graduate, within the decade, from CSUCI with a master’s degree in accounting. I have always enjoyed dealing with math and money.
I have never dreamed of my life taking the turn that it has today, with all these surprises and the decisions I made, but I just wouldn’t have it any other way.
Every year I realize what life really means to me and look back on all the obstacles I had to get through to achieve my goals.
I wish I could go back in time to when I was younger and be that softball player that I was who had so much heart and love for the game.
If I could I would travel the world to see all the different types of foods that are available in different cities and countries, for I love food and love to try new things.
My siblings, younger and older, are simply amazing yet so full of energy I love being around them.
I have learned to forgive and forget, people do deserve a second chance because everybody makes mistakes.
I saw many things in my life, good and bad, that make me the strong person I am today.
I once wished to have a pet zebra because I love the print, but sadly that never came true I never got the zebra.
I yelled through the halls of UCLA over tons of cheerleaders chanting which High School they represented. Cheer camp was so amazing and had such a huge impact on my life.
I’ve been scared of horror movies and fortunately learned to overcome that fear I now know movies are just make believe.
My friends and I, such young souls, are so outrageous we constantly laugh over the silliest reasons. We always make the best of the situation no matter if it is good or bad.
Every day I thank God for blessing me with such a wonderful life. Life is such a precious gift that nobody can take away from you.
Thursday, August 28, 2008
Wednesday, August 27, 2008
Random Auto-Biography
Elaina Martinez
Professor Boggs
English 03
20 August 2008
Random Auto- Biography
My first kiss was a new beginning to a tragic play with a true drama king that caused tears for half a year.
I love to swim freely in the deep depths of fantasy that engulfs my mind.
I want to make a difference in the world for the greater good, even if it sounds cheesy.
Everyday I daydream of beautiful far off places in the world I will go and all the great people I will meet.
My job will be like no other because it won’t be a job, it will be my dream I’ve built in my mind that was brought to life.
I have loved my dad’s inspirational stories of pain that failures had to endure to become great people.
I have never seen the shimmering lights of a meteor shower against the dark veil of the sky.
My best friend frees me from the curse of the stressful thoughts that eat at my mind.
One of the fears that pushes me to go on and not give up until I have nothing left to give is failure.
Everyday I wonder what will become of me, what’s funny is I am that life is just shaping me to be that person.
I’ve felt the deadly grip of death shock me as I witnessed my sister almost fall through the deep snow.
I’ve heard the crushing crash of a tree falling on my bedroom roof in the deep sleep of my dreams, that morning I went out to play. I saw that what I heard in my dream was nothing short of horrifying. Half of the tree was on the roof of my house.
I watched as my dad’s only father laid on a cold unforgiving bed surrounded by death, I told my grandpa “ I love you and I’m here” that’s when streams of glistening tears streamed down his withered face to let me know I was heard even if he would never get to say goodbye to us.
I’ve felt the true frustration of having to move because of lies that blinded everyone, forcing my family to be homeless to end up living in one room for a few years.
I still hold the heart breaking vision of my grandmother running to my grandfather’s grave, as her only love left her in this cruel world. I watched as she
fell apart refusing to eat, falling deep into melancholy and isolation of her memories of him and her.
A small letter with my name was sent to me today from my best friend Stephanie that I had not seen since my freshmen year, I felt the excitement a child feels in a candy store, I couldn’t help myself from jumping and dancing.
I’ve camped out under the naked sky with my family in our back yard listening to the soft music of crickets, roasting hotdogs on my dad’s small portable stove that gave out blue flowers of heat to keep us warm on the cold stone ground.
I remember when we fell into a deep sleep, I woke up in the early hours of the morning stars still dancing in the night sky. My mom was leaving for her endless hours of work when she screamed and then laughed “Stupid dog! You scared me!” my black lab Rascal was right there happily wagging his tail to see her.
Today I was caught between my friend’s words of love that she had for David but never knowing he was going through the same spinning ideas she thought.
That dark hour I had a choice to make, to take the slow death of a habit no one should ever start or stand strong with what I think is good for me.
I have never felt more scared when reality slapped me in gear when a 4 foot brown bear was approaching 20 feet away from my family with my 2 small cousins by my side at the table where we were playing cards. I grabbed my 2 cousins desperately, hoping that I could get them to safety in time as the rest of my family ran to their cabins.
I’ve struggled with tortures of school all my life with late night study for that one exam that would make or break you, long hours of summer school work racing to meet ends meet with the class, all the countless mistakes I would never make again. My friends assume I’m smart but never thought what I had to go through to get where I am now.
I know the stressful fears of a teenage senior the first of your family a to find out that graduation seems impossible to reach because of 2 classes, I struggled to balance both my Math and English to take that great walk of accomplishment. Don’t ask me how I manage to make it to graduation; the only thing I knew was that failure was not an option.
I’ve traveled to a castle deep in the mountains as marble statues greeted me to enter the clear pool of pure drinking water, underneath the tennis courts a swimming pool covered in gold floors awaited my arrive.
Professor Boggs
English 03
20 August 2008
Random Auto- Biography
My first kiss was a new beginning to a tragic play with a true drama king that caused tears for half a year.
I love to swim freely in the deep depths of fantasy that engulfs my mind.
I want to make a difference in the world for the greater good, even if it sounds cheesy.
Everyday I daydream of beautiful far off places in the world I will go and all the great people I will meet.
My job will be like no other because it won’t be a job, it will be my dream I’ve built in my mind that was brought to life.
I have loved my dad’s inspirational stories of pain that failures had to endure to become great people.
I have never seen the shimmering lights of a meteor shower against the dark veil of the sky.
My best friend frees me from the curse of the stressful thoughts that eat at my mind.
One of the fears that pushes me to go on and not give up until I have nothing left to give is failure.
Everyday I wonder what will become of me, what’s funny is I am that life is just shaping me to be that person.
I’ve felt the deadly grip of death shock me as I witnessed my sister almost fall through the deep snow.
I’ve heard the crushing crash of a tree falling on my bedroom roof in the deep sleep of my dreams, that morning I went out to play. I saw that what I heard in my dream was nothing short of horrifying. Half of the tree was on the roof of my house.
I watched as my dad’s only father laid on a cold unforgiving bed surrounded by death, I told my grandpa “ I love you and I’m here” that’s when streams of glistening tears streamed down his withered face to let me know I was heard even if he would never get to say goodbye to us.
I’ve felt the true frustration of having to move because of lies that blinded everyone, forcing my family to be homeless to end up living in one room for a few years.
I still hold the heart breaking vision of my grandmother running to my grandfather’s grave, as her only love left her in this cruel world. I watched as she
fell apart refusing to eat, falling deep into melancholy and isolation of her memories of him and her.
A small letter with my name was sent to me today from my best friend Stephanie that I had not seen since my freshmen year, I felt the excitement a child feels in a candy store, I couldn’t help myself from jumping and dancing.
I’ve camped out under the naked sky with my family in our back yard listening to the soft music of crickets, roasting hotdogs on my dad’s small portable stove that gave out blue flowers of heat to keep us warm on the cold stone ground.
I remember when we fell into a deep sleep, I woke up in the early hours of the morning stars still dancing in the night sky. My mom was leaving for her endless hours of work when she screamed and then laughed “Stupid dog! You scared me!” my black lab Rascal was right there happily wagging his tail to see her.
Today I was caught between my friend’s words of love that she had for David but never knowing he was going through the same spinning ideas she thought.
That dark hour I had a choice to make, to take the slow death of a habit no one should ever start or stand strong with what I think is good for me.
I have never felt more scared when reality slapped me in gear when a 4 foot brown bear was approaching 20 feet away from my family with my 2 small cousins by my side at the table where we were playing cards. I grabbed my 2 cousins desperately, hoping that I could get them to safety in time as the rest of my family ran to their cabins.
I’ve struggled with tortures of school all my life with late night study for that one exam that would make or break you, long hours of summer school work racing to meet ends meet with the class, all the countless mistakes I would never make again. My friends assume I’m smart but never thought what I had to go through to get where I am now.
I know the stressful fears of a teenage senior the first of your family a to find out that graduation seems impossible to reach because of 2 classes, I struggled to balance both my Math and English to take that great walk of accomplishment. Don’t ask me how I manage to make it to graduation; the only thing I knew was that failure was not an option.
I’ve traveled to a castle deep in the mountains as marble statues greeted me to enter the clear pool of pure drinking water, underneath the tennis courts a swimming pool covered in gold floors awaited my arrive.
autobiography
I was born on July 14,1990 in the city of Ventura.Everyday i wake up wondering how my day will be and if ill meet new people.I plan on transfering to a university and becoming a nurse.My bestfriend once told me to achieve my goals and forget about the rest and so far ivebeen listening to her wirds.I have felt myself struggling for my goals but i have reached them all and plan to achieve more as my life goes on.Every year my family and i go to New York to visit our gratefull raletives, they always welcome us with a big surprise.I love riding my dirt bik with all my friends and cousins,we mostly enjoy going riding to gorman on the weekends.I want to do the best of me in life as i can,it doesnt matter what i have to do to be successfull.My cousin Mike is always keping my head up and not leting me down,hes always there when i need to talk to someoneThe high school i attended which is located in fillmore was small and mostly everyone knew eachother.
10 things that happen to me.
1.when i fell off a mountain on my quad.
2.when i got my license
3.first time driving in the freeway.
4.when i got caught tagging the school.
5.when i graduated from FHS.
6.my first girlfriend.
7.my first motorcycle lesson
8.when my dads horse died.
9.my first job.
10.my first job.
The first time I drove on the freeway wasn't a good first time experience. I didn't really know how to drive.I was really scared and nervous,because it was at night time and i wasn't prepared to drive at that time,but I had to in order to learn.The mistake I made was that when I was going to change lanes,I did not check my mirrors or turn my head over my shoulder. As soon as I made that mistake my dad told me,"Every time your going to change lanes you have to look over your shoulder."As I kept driving I then was looking at my mirrors all the time checking if any cars would come behind me.When I got home,I sat in my room and promised my self not to ever make that dangerous mistake ever again.
2.when i got my license
3.first time driving in the freeway.
4.when i got caught tagging the school.
5.when i graduated from FHS.
6.my first girlfriend.
7.my first motorcycle lesson
8.when my dads horse died.
9.my first job.
10.my first job.
The first time I drove on the freeway wasn't a good first time experience. I didn't really know how to drive.I was really scared and nervous,because it was at night time and i wasn't prepared to drive at that time,but I had to in order to learn.The mistake I made was that when I was going to change lanes,I did not check my mirrors or turn my head over my shoulder. As soon as I made that mistake my dad told me,"Every time your going to change lanes you have to look over your shoulder."As I kept driving I then was looking at my mirrors all the time checking if any cars would come behind me.When I got home,I sat in my room and promised my self not to ever make that dangerous mistake ever again.
Auto
Autobiography
Born in the beautiful city of Goleta, California,
A baby child off to a long journey ahead of him,
Growing up adventuring the swampy creeks,
Discovering many spices of frogs and fish,
Riding my bike listening to the wind zoom by my ears,
Plucking long strains of grass to produce a nuce,
As the scaly lizards were then obtained,
Roaming my neighborhood on the hot sunny days,
Darting up and down the street as the neighborhood kids would take part in laser tag,
As the years gusted by here I arrive in Ventura,
Flying through middle school, Big bad high school had arrived ,
Participating in Athletics,
As the long sore practices stunned my body,
Hearing the Whistle blow sounded kick off,
Running up skyline to prepare for the glorious track meets,
Runners on your marks, Get set, Bang!!!!
Running as fast as possible I heard the chants from supporting friends and parents,
When the last 50 meters had arrived my legs felt like a 1000 pounds,
The day had come, Graduation!!!!
Never felt so accomplished, As the thrilled students marched the burning hot turf
Up north, seeing nothing but Cow girls and Cow boys,
As the Good Ol Toby Keith prepared to rock the stage,
Where as in the Mountains of Tahoe ,
I saw the beauty of pure white hills,
Where I then experienced, The fluffy white snow tap my face
Stuck in snow up to my waist, I faced a situation
Was it life or death?
Trying not to panic, I made my way up the beastly hill
I could not imagine if I had not been rescued,
My father, A strong and determined man, where as my mother a strict and loving parent,
George, my brother is one I look up to,
I have felt the emotional deep pain of losing a loved one,
Summer, one I will never forget as many move on into the future,
Everyday I look at the beauty of being here on earth
And live life to its fullest with no regrets!
Born in the beautiful city of Goleta, California,
A baby child off to a long journey ahead of him,
Growing up adventuring the swampy creeks,
Discovering many spices of frogs and fish,
Riding my bike listening to the wind zoom by my ears,
Plucking long strains of grass to produce a nuce,
As the scaly lizards were then obtained,
Roaming my neighborhood on the hot sunny days,
Darting up and down the street as the neighborhood kids would take part in laser tag,
As the years gusted by here I arrive in Ventura,
Flying through middle school, Big bad high school had arrived ,
Participating in Athletics,
As the long sore practices stunned my body,
Hearing the Whistle blow sounded kick off,
Running up skyline to prepare for the glorious track meets,
Runners on your marks, Get set, Bang!!!!
Running as fast as possible I heard the chants from supporting friends and parents,
When the last 50 meters had arrived my legs felt like a 1000 pounds,
The day had come, Graduation!!!!
Never felt so accomplished, As the thrilled students marched the burning hot turf
Up north, seeing nothing but Cow girls and Cow boys,
As the Good Ol Toby Keith prepared to rock the stage,
Where as in the Mountains of Tahoe ,
I saw the beauty of pure white hills,
Where I then experienced, The fluffy white snow tap my face
Stuck in snow up to my waist, I faced a situation
Was it life or death?
Trying not to panic, I made my way up the beastly hill
I could not imagine if I had not been rescued,
My father, A strong and determined man, where as my mother a strict and loving parent,
George, my brother is one I look up to,
I have felt the emotional deep pain of losing a loved one,
Summer, one I will never forget as many move on into the future,
Everyday I look at the beauty of being here on earth
And live life to its fullest with no regrets!
Tuesday, August 26, 2008
Random Autobiography
I dropped into this world on the sixth of October in 1990. Loneliness and confusion fills my mind everyday all day. I believed lies so I eventually learned to trut nobody but myself. My father supprts my family by working as much as he can to provide my family's needs. My mother cares for my family by feeding us and taking good care of us so that we dont get into any trouble. My best friend in the whole wide world is my cousin because she is the only one that knows the real me. I can be mean when those i love most have been put down or hurt. All throughout my middle and high school years i have had a girl named Bianca hate me and things havent changed because she still feels the same about me. My first kiss was by someone that didnt even love me. I fell in love with my best friends ex boyfriend. After a while i learned the difference between holding a hand and falling in love. i have made mistakes in my life, I have let people take advantage of me and i accepted way less than what I deserve, but i have learned from my bad choices and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry, ill know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than what i deserve. My future carrer is to be an accountant and to graduate from California State University of Channel Islands. I love my family for always supporting me and believeing in me, but especially for giving me my dream Mercedes-Benz. I also want to thank god for giving me what i have and for giving me this great life.
RaNdOm AtObIoGrApHy
I want to become a nurse, so I can help those
who cannot help themselves. I love spending
time with my family and friends, because they
make me feel warm and happy inside. I like to
see peoples reactions when they say things
behind my back, and think that I wont be able to
understand them because of the way I look. On
my first day of kinder garden I fought with a mean
girl which I now call my best friend. As the days
go by I know my life will only get harder, as I get
closer to my goals.
I know my parents work long and hard hours everyday
so I that I am able to get the education, they were
not able to get. Although I have made many bad choices
over the years, that not only affect my life but the lives of
others, I don’t regret making any of them. I enjoy my job
because I have fun with my co-workers, and get to interact
with people, that are interesting and out going, but many
days work is hard work. My dog is small, sweet, and peaceful,
but don’t let her size fool you because she can be feisty when
she feels she has to send a message to anyone or anything.
As the years go by I tend to miss her more, but I am afraid I
will forget her face, smell and warm touch as time passes by.
who cannot help themselves. I love spending
time with my family and friends, because they
make me feel warm and happy inside. I like to
see peoples reactions when they say things
behind my back, and think that I wont be able to
understand them because of the way I look. On
my first day of kinder garden I fought with a mean
girl which I now call my best friend. As the days
go by I know my life will only get harder, as I get
closer to my goals.
I know my parents work long and hard hours everyday
so I that I am able to get the education, they were
not able to get. Although I have made many bad choices
over the years, that not only affect my life but the lives of
others, I don’t regret making any of them. I enjoy my job
because I have fun with my co-workers, and get to interact
with people, that are interesting and out going, but many
days work is hard work. My dog is small, sweet, and peaceful,
but don’t let her size fool you because she can be feisty when
she feels she has to send a message to anyone or anything.
As the years go by I tend to miss her more, but I am afraid I
will forget her face, smell and warm touch as time passes by.
all about me
I was the one that was born in the month that all children beg for candy. i know for sure that it was at the same time Oprah was coming on. my dog is my protector, i have held her in my hands and felt that she is truth worthy. I was waken up by the loud noise of the huge thunder storms in west Virginia. All thorough high school i was a head above the rest, always feeling like some people are against me. my mom cares for special needs children, but at the end of the day she is the one that i tell every thing to. 17 and 14 are the ages of my sisters. we always have our differences, but at times when we down, we can always go to each other for advice. my dad is a lion hearted who battled strong against the cancer that tried to take his life. when i wake in the morning I see him sitting on the couch, i know for sure that god has saved him and he is free. if i work hard i know for sure that i will be successful in college. I have never been to Spain, Greece, or China. The Great wall, is a place that i would like to visit one day. this year is my first year in college and i hope its the best!!
My Random Autobiography
My Random Autobiography
I arrived on October 26, 1989. My brother was already there to show me the way. As far back as I can remember I have always had pet birds doves, diamond doves, parakeets, and a cockatiel named Shippo. In addition to birds I also like aircraft, especially the ones from World War II. My first memory of liking aircraft and wanting to be a pilot was when I was about 5. I saw a helicopter dusting the fields. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying gas R.C. planes. Some crash but most soar as high as my dream to be a pilot. I belong to a RC plane club called the Channel Islands condors, we have a field with a runway that we fly our planes at. I do pretty well when it comes to computers. In fact I can take one apart and put it back together. My brother is the expert with thoughts machines. He always answers my questions about computers and math. He can program and rebuild them. I trust my brother there for we work well together. Nothing can split us apart. I don’t go out much, I like to stay at home and work in my garage, building model planes and working on other projects. My family is the most important thing to me. When my grandfather says something that is the way it is going to be. He is a strong, strict and caring person. My grandmother is a loving and kind hearted person. I would walk through fire for both of them.
I arrived on October 26, 1989. My brother was already there to show me the way. As far back as I can remember I have always had pet birds doves, diamond doves, parakeets, and a cockatiel named Shippo. In addition to birds I also like aircraft, especially the ones from World War II. My first memory of liking aircraft and wanting to be a pilot was when I was about 5. I saw a helicopter dusting the fields. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying gas R.C. planes. Some crash but most soar as high as my dream to be a pilot. I belong to a RC plane club called the Channel Islands condors, we have a field with a runway that we fly our planes at. I do pretty well when it comes to computers. In fact I can take one apart and put it back together. My brother is the expert with thoughts machines. He always answers my questions about computers and math. He can program and rebuild them. I trust my brother there for we work well together. Nothing can split us apart. I don’t go out much, I like to stay at home and work in my garage, building model planes and working on other projects. My family is the most important thing to me. When my grandfather says something that is the way it is going to be. He is a strong, strict and caring person. My grandmother is a loving and kind hearted person. I would walk through fire for both of them.
My Random Autobiography
My Random Autobiography
I arrived on October 26, 1989. My brother was already there to show me the way. As far back as I can remember I have always had pet birds doves, diamond doves, parakeets, and a cockatiel named Shippo. In addition to birds I also like aircraft, especially the ones from World War II. My first memory of liking aircraft and wanting to be a pilot was when I was about 5. I saw a helicopter dusting the fields. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying gas R.C. planes. Some crash but most soar as high as my dream to be a pilot. I belong to a RC plane club called the Channel Islands condors, we have a field with a runway that we fly our planes at. I do pretty well when it comes to computers. In fact I can take one apart and put it back together. My brother is the expert with thoughts machines. He always answers my questions about computers and math. He can program and rebuild them. I trust my brother there for we work well together. Nothing can split us apart. I don’t go out much, I like to stay at home and work in my garage, building model planes and working on other projects. My family is the most important thing to me. When my grandfather says something that is the way it is going to be. He is a strong, strict and caring person. My grandmother is a loving and kind hearted person. I would walk through fire for both of them.
I arrived on October 26, 1989. My brother was already there to show me the way. As far back as I can remember I have always had pet birds doves, diamond doves, parakeets, and a cockatiel named Shippo. In addition to birds I also like aircraft, especially the ones from World War II. My first memory of liking aircraft and wanting to be a pilot was when I was about 5. I saw a helicopter dusting the fields. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying gas R.C. planes. Some crash but most soar as high as my dream to be a pilot. I belong to a RC plane club called the Channel Islands condors, we have a field with a runway that we fly our planes at. I do pretty well when it comes to computers. In fact I can take one apart and put it back together. My brother is the expert with thoughts machines. He always answers my questions about computers and math. He can program and rebuild them. I trust my brother there for we work well together. Nothing can split us apart. I don’t go out much, I like to stay at home and work in my garage, building model planes and working on other projects. My family is the most important thing to me. When my grandfather says something that is the way it is going to be. He is a strong, strict and caring person. My grandmother is a loving and kind hearted person. I would walk through fire for both of them.
Random autobiography
I erupted on the day
before June 8th 1990.
One of many babies
born at St. Johns Hospital;
but raised in Fillmore
my entire life.
I have seen many
“First Place” trophies,
but no “C.I.F Ring”.
My father taught me everything
there is to know about
girls and cars, as we worked
on our 62’ Impala in our back yard.
I have loved a couple girls,
but none like this one.
My mother used to
Hold my hand
to cross the street,
now she watches me as I
leave to college every morning.
The blood gushing
from my head felt warm
after wrestling with my cousin.
My best friend’s enemies
are my enemies.
My grandma made me soup
when I was sick;
I would pretend to like it
So I wouldn’t hurt her feelings.
My cousin rolls in a
Lincoln MKz, he is like
a brother to me.
I love Cali in the summer time,
even though she’s only around
for a few months…
before June 8th 1990.
One of many babies
born at St. Johns Hospital;
but raised in Fillmore
my entire life.
I have seen many
“First Place” trophies,
but no “C.I.F Ring”.
My father taught me everything
there is to know about
girls and cars, as we worked
on our 62’ Impala in our back yard.
I have loved a couple girls,
but none like this one.
My mother used to
Hold my hand
to cross the street,
now she watches me as I
leave to college every morning.
The blood gushing
from my head felt warm
after wrestling with my cousin.
My best friend’s enemies
are my enemies.
My grandma made me soup
when I was sick;
I would pretend to like it
So I wouldn’t hurt her feelings.
My cousin rolls in a
Lincoln MKz, he is like
a brother to me.
I love Cali in the summer time,
even though she’s only around
for a few months…
Random Autobiography
Mauricio Quirino
Sarah Boggs
English V03
August/19/08
I was born in a beautiful city of Ventura California in July 6th 1989, number 6 seems to be very interesting for me in different aspects, because man were created in day 6 according to the bible, other reason is because I live in planet 6 if we count from the far to the closest planet to the sun, also to see what is light there is 6 different colors that interact one each other then light became light, no wonder I was born in the 6th day of July my birthday
I have seen UFO’s on the sky no is commonly to have this kind of experiences.
I enjoy to explore nature behavior.
My father live in Mexico, I don’t understand why he decide to be in Mexico alone, he’s excuse is he have a business to manage. My mom is a headworker woman full of intentions to success in life along with my parents.
My first kiss was almost 5 years ago when I was in 7th grade, now I am ready for the next kiss.
The best experience I ever happen to me is my close die. I was poisoned by an scorpion, I remember that night I saw my dad and mom crying for me that was the reason to fight for my life this event was so fast as a dream.
I have learn that as much you are interested about the big and small universes and research them you will probably understand about life.
Life is better analyzed when you study deeply and empirical. Society is not trustily anymore than before people did.
My goal is to clear life meaning to find the reason of life; overall I have learned nothing yet. Is a whole universe to study and understand. I have formulated a theory which states “as universe keep expanding there will be weirder thing coming up making less comprehensible the universe. Problem is that universe is expanding and no stops.
I don’t know what is really love, maybe because I never try it or is not my time yet.
I read the bible and turns out that there were men who teach about love in a different way that on that time was. Such love your enemies. How such a person will do this must be crazy no acceptable for this modern era.
Every second here is a googol of reactions and no visible events who will determinate our future positively or negatively.
I know for sure I better have a good GPA to transfer t a university.
I love wondering about creationism. Life is very balanced is not literally no logically, is about what is our nature.
Life has two paths and you must choose one, truth or vice versa is necessary to deal with this phenomenon. So you can determine what you have done so far, here. In this society you will never know if you have achieved in your objectives if you did not have any obstacle. In other words, problems that we have in our life are important. my theory at this is, as much grater are you problems and you go through them the more you get mature in the way you think, talk and behave.
Even in science there are negative charges called electrons, and positive charges called protons. Without this charges the life of many elements it was not possible as we already know already, humans depend of these weird effects.
The big question will be who control all these? Is there a God? Or, is created by itself? Either way I believe that everything have a reason to be, if there were a reason must exist a cause.
My theory is not finish yet I have a whole life to research more about my world and universes.
Sarah Boggs
English V03
August/19/08
I was born in a beautiful city of Ventura California in July 6th 1989, number 6 seems to be very interesting for me in different aspects, because man were created in day 6 according to the bible, other reason is because I live in planet 6 if we count from the far to the closest planet to the sun, also to see what is light there is 6 different colors that interact one each other then light became light, no wonder I was born in the 6th day of July my birthday
I have seen UFO’s on the sky no is commonly to have this kind of experiences.
I enjoy to explore nature behavior.
My father live in Mexico, I don’t understand why he decide to be in Mexico alone, he’s excuse is he have a business to manage. My mom is a headworker woman full of intentions to success in life along with my parents.
My first kiss was almost 5 years ago when I was in 7th grade, now I am ready for the next kiss.
The best experience I ever happen to me is my close die. I was poisoned by an scorpion, I remember that night I saw my dad and mom crying for me that was the reason to fight for my life this event was so fast as a dream.
I have learn that as much you are interested about the big and small universes and research them you will probably understand about life.
Life is better analyzed when you study deeply and empirical. Society is not trustily anymore than before people did.
My goal is to clear life meaning to find the reason of life; overall I have learned nothing yet. Is a whole universe to study and understand. I have formulated a theory which states “as universe keep expanding there will be weirder thing coming up making less comprehensible the universe. Problem is that universe is expanding and no stops.
I don’t know what is really love, maybe because I never try it or is not my time yet.
I read the bible and turns out that there were men who teach about love in a different way that on that time was. Such love your enemies. How such a person will do this must be crazy no acceptable for this modern era.
Every second here is a googol of reactions and no visible events who will determinate our future positively or negatively.
I know for sure I better have a good GPA to transfer t a university.
I love wondering about creationism. Life is very balanced is not literally no logically, is about what is our nature.
Life has two paths and you must choose one, truth or vice versa is necessary to deal with this phenomenon. So you can determine what you have done so far, here. In this society you will never know if you have achieved in your objectives if you did not have any obstacle. In other words, problems that we have in our life are important. my theory at this is, as much grater are you problems and you go through them the more you get mature in the way you think, talk and behave.
Even in science there are negative charges called electrons, and positive charges called protons. Without this charges the life of many elements it was not possible as we already know already, humans depend of these weird effects.
The big question will be who control all these? Is there a God? Or, is created by itself? Either way I believe that everything have a reason to be, if there were a reason must exist a cause.
My theory is not finish yet I have a whole life to research more about my world and universes.
1) The day I first saw my neice.
2) My quincenera.
3) The day me and my best friend got in a fight because I didnt listen to her.
4) The day i fell in love with my best friends ex boyfriend.
5) My Senior Prom.
6) The day I got my dream car, My Mercedes-Benz.
7) The moment I saw my mom fight.
8) The day me and my brother got into an argument over the telephone.
9) The day my brothers best friend died.
10) The day me and my cousin got into an argument because of her boyfriend.
The day I started talking to some guy that i met on myspace we ended up becoming really close then I come to find out that he had recently went out with my best friend. I told my best friend and she was fine with it because she had a new boyfriend by that time but it did bother him so we just stopped talking to each other like that and we just became friends. I learned that it is not good to go out with somebody that was your best friends ex boyfriend because things will not work out.
2) My quincenera.
3) The day me and my best friend got in a fight because I didnt listen to her.
4) The day i fell in love with my best friends ex boyfriend.
5) My Senior Prom.
6) The day I got my dream car, My Mercedes-Benz.
7) The moment I saw my mom fight.
8) The day me and my brother got into an argument over the telephone.
9) The day my brothers best friend died.
10) The day me and my cousin got into an argument because of her boyfriend.
The day I started talking to some guy that i met on myspace we ended up becoming really close then I come to find out that he had recently went out with my best friend. I told my best friend and she was fine with it because she had a new boyfriend by that time but it did bother him so we just stopped talking to each other like that and we just became friends. I learned that it is not good to go out with somebody that was your best friends ex boyfriend because things will not work out.
Ideas for narrative essay
1. How I survive.
2. A Traveling to mexico with my family.
3. My first date in a restaurant.
4. My First presentation in front of my classmates.
5. My first fight againts my best friend.
What happen ? i was discussing about who got the better grades in math class when i was in 6th. grade i he did not understand why he got a bad grade than me if he did all homewoks and he never was late in class, then he begun to pushing me and i push him. he got mad from that point we start fighting until we got tired. and the best thing of this is the the next day we meet again as if nothing has happen.we still friends.
2. A Traveling to mexico with my family.
3. My first date in a restaurant.
4. My First presentation in front of my classmates.
5. My first fight againts my best friend.
What happen ? i was discussing about who got the better grades in math class when i was in 6th. grade i he did not understand why he got a bad grade than me if he did all homewoks and he never was late in class, then he begun to pushing me and i push him. he got mad from that point we start fighting until we got tired. and the best thing of this is the the next day we meet again as if nothing has happen.we still friends.
Ideas for a Narrative Essay
1. My first real Boyfriend
2. First year of High School
3. My first trip to Cancun
4. My first day of college
5. My week in Hawaii
6. My first kiss
7. When I use to play with my neighbors
8. When I went to watch Batman
9. The First time I put on contacts
10. First time I had sushi
I was introduced to my my now boyfriend, in a some what intresting way about three years ago. My friend had been talking to him over the phone, she always talked about how great he was and that he was so sweet. I was curious if it was really true that he was nice. My friend decided to call him and I at the same time so we could all talk together. I introduced myself as did he. Then I started to talk to him a little more everyday, and I really started to get a a little crush on him.
2. First year of High School
3. My first trip to Cancun
4. My first day of college
5. My week in Hawaii
6. My first kiss
7. When I use to play with my neighbors
8. When I went to watch Batman
9. The First time I put on contacts
10. First time I had sushi
I was introduced to my my now boyfriend, in a some what intresting way about three years ago. My friend had been talking to him over the phone, she always talked about how great he was and that he was so sweet. I was curious if it was really true that he was nice. My friend decided to call him and I at the same time so we could all talk together. I introduced myself as did he. Then I started to talk to him a little more everyday, and I really started to get a a little crush on him.
Ideas for narrative essay
1.The time I lost my father.
2.The time I first felt snow.
3.The first day I entered High school.
4.The craziet party I went to.
5.My first trip to Mexico.
6.My second trip to Mexico.
7.The worst lightning storm ever.
8.The day my dog moved away.
9.The day I lost my father forever.
10.The day I met my girlfriend for the first time.
It was a day like any other at home just relaxing. My sister answered the phone when my step brother called from santa monica. My sister got off the phone and approached me first with a very upset look on her face. She didn't hesitate to tell me that my father had passed and then immediately began to cry. My two older brothers and my mom got home as my sister approached them to tell them the horrible news. My mother immediately broke down with sadness overwhelming her as she hugged my older brother for comfort and support. My oldest brother and I didn't react with tears but more with mourning.
2.The time I first felt snow.
3.The first day I entered High school.
4.The craziet party I went to.
5.My first trip to Mexico.
6.My second trip to Mexico.
7.The worst lightning storm ever.
8.The day my dog moved away.
9.The day I lost my father forever.
10.The day I met my girlfriend for the first time.
It was a day like any other at home just relaxing. My sister answered the phone when my step brother called from santa monica. My sister got off the phone and approached me first with a very upset look on her face. She didn't hesitate to tell me that my father had passed and then immediately began to cry. My two older brothers and my mom got home as my sister approached them to tell them the horrible news. My mother immediately broke down with sadness overwhelming her as she hugged my older brother for comfort and support. My oldest brother and I didn't react with tears but more with mourning.
In class assignment
1. making varsity soccer team.
2.finding 100 dls on the floor
3.graduating high school
4.last year when I hospitalized for 1 week
5.1st time going to mexico with my family
6. starting all 4 games at national soccer cup
7. getting my drivers license
8.first time i recieved a car payment
9.first day of high school
10.first time ever going to the snow
In August I was hospitilized for about a week, due to a virus in my immune system. This incident changed the way I view life and made me appreciate life more. I felt this way because you never know what could happen. From time to time I would feel really depressed, because the doctor had said that I was lucky I didnt die because the virus I had was really deadly. As I was recooperating I couldnt eat anything but milk and jello, and was starting to realize that this sucks and I said to myself," It's going to be okay, food is not going anywere. You'll be able to eat again. there are people out there that are in someway living a stressfull life, with lots of downs and srtuggles in their lives." Everyday I thank god for giving me another chance to live and for giving me a healthy life once again.
2.finding 100 dls on the floor
3.graduating high school
4.last year when I hospitalized for 1 week
5.1st time going to mexico with my family
6. starting all 4 games at national soccer cup
7. getting my drivers license
8.first time i recieved a car payment
9.first day of high school
10.first time ever going to the snow
In August I was hospitilized for about a week, due to a virus in my immune system. This incident changed the way I view life and made me appreciate life more. I felt this way because you never know what could happen. From time to time I would feel really depressed, because the doctor had said that I was lucky I didnt die because the virus I had was really deadly. As I was recooperating I couldnt eat anything but milk and jello, and was starting to realize that this sucks and I said to myself," It's going to be okay, food is not going anywere. You'll be able to eat again. there are people out there that are in someway living a stressfull life, with lots of downs and srtuggles in their lives." Everyday I thank god for giving me another chance to live and for giving me a healthy life once again.
Ideas for Narrative Essays
My Life Stories
1. It all started when I was little, I started ridding horses at the age of three years old. I have grown up with them all my life, even till now and taking lessons learning parts of the horse, how a saddle, and the bit go on correctly
2. I have a event in my life when I had a bad feeling and told my brother not to ride his bike but he did so anyway and hurt himself really bad.
3. I remember my first year at high school.
4. My first time ridding a bike and why I hated it.
5. The time I played like five sports at one time that was interesting.
6. The time I went to see my family in Idaho for the winter, it was my first time in the snow.
7. My Vacation in Las Vegas was the best I though so far and I liked it so much I'm going back in December of this year.
8. My dog Amber she is not only just a pet but also my best friend. She has been a part of my family ever since I was six years old now I am eight-teen years of age.
9. I remember the first time I met my boyfriend and how skinny he was. He looked like a little boy with a real shy attitude. Now its totally different when he's around me.
10. My first day of college.
Ridding
I was about three years old when I wrode my first horse. Her name was Shala and she was a black mare. My mother had this little saddle my brother and I would us to ride on. I had learn up unltil I was about may be twelve and then sent me to my first ridding lessons. Marsha was my instructor and I would practice on a horse with no name like the song, but we did call her mare. I would ride wester because I enjoyed it the most. It is important to me because its not only my mothers hobbie but its also mine and its something her and I share without getting into an arrgument. My dad calls it horse crazy its great.
1.) The first time got in a fight with my sister.
2.) The first time driving.
3.) My first day in high school.
4.) My first high school dance.
5.) My first job.
6.) My first pet.
7.) My first driving test.
8.) The first time I got in an argument with my best friend.
9.) When I fell of the bike.
10.) The day my father passed away.
The first time I got in a fight with my sister was the day that my mother locked us up until we said sorry to each other. We were in the room for like three hours. It was difficult to talk to her because we had so much anger towards each other. But eventually we had to talk in order to get out of the room. Later on that day we started to realize how dumb it was to fight with each other and ever since that day we never faught again.
2.) The first time driving.
3.) My first day in high school.
4.) My first high school dance.
5.) My first job.
6.) My first pet.
7.) My first driving test.
8.) The first time I got in an argument with my best friend.
9.) When I fell of the bike.
10.) The day my father passed away.
The first time I got in a fight with my sister was the day that my mother locked us up until we said sorry to each other. We were in the room for like three hours. It was difficult to talk to her because we had so much anger towards each other. But eventually we had to talk in order to get out of the room. Later on that day we started to realize how dumb it was to fight with each other and ever since that day we never faught again.
1.) When i got caught with my tongue pierced.
2.)When i got my car.
3.)My first day of High School.
4.)My first job.
5.)First broken bone.
6.)My first time going to the snow.
7.)When i got my drivers license.
8.)First worst kiss.
9.)My worst date.
10.)Being the youngest child.
I got my tongue pierced when I was sixteen years old, without my parents permission. I was able to hide it from them for a year. I got caught with my tongue pierced on February 27, 2008. I was driving with my parents and we had just pulled up to the drive way. When I started arguing about the way I was driving. In that moment I forgot not to open my mouth too much for it to be visible, it happened, my dad saw it. I wanted to cry. I was so scared of what he was going to do to me. Luckily he just told me to take it off, "Because young ladies shouldn't have things like that."
2.)When i got my car.
3.)My first day of High School.
4.)My first job.
5.)First broken bone.
6.)My first time going to the snow.
7.)When i got my drivers license.
8.)First worst kiss.
9.)My worst date.
10.)Being the youngest child.
I got my tongue pierced when I was sixteen years old, without my parents permission. I was able to hide it from them for a year. I got caught with my tongue pierced on February 27, 2008. I was driving with my parents and we had just pulled up to the drive way. When I started arguing about the way I was driving. In that moment I forgot not to open my mouth too much for it to be visible, it happened, my dad saw it. I wanted to cry. I was so scared of what he was going to do to me. Luckily he just told me to take it off, "Because young ladies shouldn't have things like that."
Ideas for the Narrative Essay
1. My first day in College.
2. My family's immigration to U.S.
3. My sister's hospitalization.
4. My best soccer game.
5. The best kiss of my life.
6. My impact of the 9/11 attack.
7. My biggest party.
8. The worst fight between my best friend and I.
9. My journey to Chicago City.
10. My last year in High School.
2. My family's immigration to U.S.
3. My sister's hospitalization.
4. My best soccer game.
5. The best kiss of my life.
6. My impact of the 9/11 attack.
7. My biggest party.
8. The worst fight between my best friend and I.
9. My journey to Chicago City.
10. My last year in High School.
My Biggest Party
When I was just a little girl I dreamed with having a party where I could wear a princess dress. I always told my parents about this and they used to call me a dreamer. As time passed out I would not forget this dream until I make come true. When I was about to turn 14 years old, my parents told me that they were going to prepare a party for my 15th birthday. A few days later I went to look for a beautiful dress for my party; I chose it gold color. My parents were in charge of the music, mass, food, invitations and everything we needed for the party. Whey told me they were going to invite about 600 people, I was really amazed because I did not expected that many people. When the dream day arrived I felt the happiest girl all over the world. When I first went into the Church I didn't see a lot of people, but when I was walking out it was the opposite. At dinner I was waiting for the 400 people my parents told me about, but my surprise was that there wasn't 600 people, instead there was about 900. The good thing is that there was enough food for everybody. At the dance everything went just how I wanted. That party is going to stay in my head the rest of my life.
Ideas for Narrative Essay
(1)When I learned to ride a bike,(2)The Time my dog died,(2)When I learned to drive, (3)When my bird died, (4)When I graduated from High School,(5) When I had my first flight lesson,(6)When I learned to fly and build RC planes,(7) My first day of school, (8)When I got my license,(9) When I learned to fix computers,(10) When I got my motorcycle.
Ever since I could remember I have always wanted to be a pilot and have been interested in airplanes. So I thought it would be fun to fly gas powered RC planes. Since my Grandfather and I didn't know much about model planes we went to our neighbor up the street named Ted who builds and flys RC planes. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying model planes with the help of my Grandfather and neighbor. My Grandfather has also taken me to the Santa Paula Airport for a few flight lessons and that has greatly expanded my knowledge and ambition to be a pilot.
Ever since I could remember I have always wanted to be a pilot and have been interested in airplanes. So I thought it would be fun to fly gas powered RC planes. Since my Grandfather and I didn't know much about model planes we went to our neighbor up the street named Ted who builds and flys RC planes. For the last four and a half years I have been building and flying model planes with the help of my Grandfather and neighbor. My Grandfather has also taken me to the Santa Paula Airport for a few flight lessons and that has greatly expanded my knowledge and ambition to be a pilot.
Ideas for narrative essay
- Learning to drive with my parents
- first time i ever had a marshmallow at the age of 5
- first time i learned how to ride a bike
- Driving to Arizona last summer time with out a spare tire
- the first time dealing with someone in my family having cancer
- the first time going to Oregon two years ago by my self
- the first time i had surgery on my foot
- my firs summer job working with kids of all ages
- first time ever having braces
- first time going to college
It was the longest day of my life, and the car ride felt like it was for ever. finally my mom and I arrived at the Orthodontist office and I was so scared that something really bad was going to happen. when we arrived at the office they had us wait in the office for the longest time. Finally I heard the door open and the Dr called out my name and I was ready for the long adventure ahead of me. I was walking to the chair thinking what is going to happen to me, the Dr. then came and told me what his names was and then started to tell me what he was going to be doing to me today. that made me fell so much better and I felt like I can take on the world. when he started to put the huge metal thing in my mouth it sounded as there was a explosion going on in my mouth. I learned that if I wanted to have perfect teeth then I would have to go through so much pain, its really worth it at the end.
Ideas for Narrative Essay
1. when i crashed my car on homecoming...
2. when i sprained my ankle during C.I.F playoffs...
3. when i got in a fight at Carls Jr....
4. when i got suspended from school for a senior prank...
5. when i got booked by the cops for vandalism...
6. first day of college...
7. my first tattoo...
8. when i got my license...
9. first time i went snowboarding...
10. when i graduated FHS!!!!!!
My senior year during homecoming week, all the seniors were gathered at the church parking lot and were planning to drive around town ,honking our horns. I was with my friends and I had to put gas in my car because my gas tank was near empty. When we got to the church everybody was waiting for us and we all started peeling out in the parking lot. When we left the parking lot I was driving really fast and as soon as I turned on the first corner my car caught some gravel and sand. My car slid out of control and all i could hear was the screeching from the tires. The next thing i know i had crashed into a boulder on the side of the road. Nobody in the car was wearing their seat belts! I got out of my car to look at the damage and the whole front end of my car was wrecked. I was so mad that i punched a tree.
2. when i sprained my ankle during C.I.F playoffs...
3. when i got in a fight at Carls Jr....
4. when i got suspended from school for a senior prank...
5. when i got booked by the cops for vandalism...
6. first day of college...
7. my first tattoo...
8. when i got my license...
9. first time i went snowboarding...
10. when i graduated FHS!!!!!!
My senior year during homecoming week, all the seniors were gathered at the church parking lot and were planning to drive around town ,honking our horns. I was with my friends and I had to put gas in my car because my gas tank was near empty. When we got to the church everybody was waiting for us and we all started peeling out in the parking lot. When we left the parking lot I was driving really fast and as soon as I turned on the first corner my car caught some gravel and sand. My car slid out of control and all i could hear was the screeching from the tires. The next thing i know i had crashed into a boulder on the side of the road. Nobody in the car was wearing their seat belts! I got out of my car to look at the damage and the whole front end of my car was wrecked. I was so mad that i punched a tree.
Ideas Narrative Essay
1. How I felt the first time I touched a football
2. The time I had cook for my myself
3. The time I had to saved my friends dad from losing his hand
4. The time I challenged my mom on school
5. The day I asked my girlfriend to be my girlfriend
6. The day I broke my finger playing football
7. The day I told my girlfriend i loved her
8. How I felt when I left my girlfriend to come to Ventura College to play football
9. What happened the first day of football practice
10. How it feels to be away from the people I love most
I think the first time I touched a football I was on a park field with my father. I felt like I was the only person on the field. The ball in my hands this was an amazing feeling. This is when I knew I had to play the game of football. I love the feeling of knowing I could throw the football and it would spin in the air. When I held held the football in my hands I suddenly started draming of me playing professional football. This was the best feeling ever. This is when I meet my first true love.
2. The time I had cook for my myself
3. The time I had to saved my friends dad from losing his hand
4. The time I challenged my mom on school
5. The day I asked my girlfriend to be my girlfriend
6. The day I broke my finger playing football
7. The day I told my girlfriend i loved her
8. How I felt when I left my girlfriend to come to Ventura College to play football
9. What happened the first day of football practice
10. How it feels to be away from the people I love most
I think the first time I touched a football I was on a park field with my father. I felt like I was the only person on the field. The ball in my hands this was an amazing feeling. This is when I knew I had to play the game of football. I love the feeling of knowing I could throw the football and it would spin in the air. When I held held the football in my hands I suddenly started draming of me playing professional football. This was the best feeling ever. This is when I meet my first true love.
Ideas for Narrative Essay
- Saving my Sister from drowning
- Being truthful with money with my family
- a little lie about taking a nap
Saving my Sister
Every year on my wonderful summer vacation we take a 6 hour fishing trip to a place called Bishop with my family. We stay in the same isolated town in the same small suffocating cabins, even thought it's hotter than hot up there and the elevation makes you want to rest from the long trip but the only thing you want is to stay by the air conditioning. Luckily for us there is a pool on the other side of the cabins, my sister and I thought it would be a great idea to go swim and cool off instead of suffering in the hot weather; we both asked our grandparents if we could go to the pool and my grandmother said "yes, just let me get some towels and we'll go." we waited very impatiently in our suits, finally my grandmother was ready and we were more than ready to get cooled off from the scorching sun. The water was as clear as the never ending blue sky, I wanted to jump in the deep end of the pool but I knew the water was as cold as the ice from the mountains that lived near by; so I walked with my sister and my grandmother to the shallow end of the pool, when all of a sudden I heard a big splash. I turned knowing it was probably my sister showing off, plus she knows how to swim so it didn't bother me too much. As I took a closer look the water was moving frantically around her splashing up to where I couldn't make out her face, panic hit me! Was she okay! What's happening! I screamed to my grandmother "Somethings wrong! Save her! Save her grandma!" my grandmothers response was uncalled for "She's okay, she just-" I didn't let her finish, I jumped into the freezing cold pool swam under my sister and lifted her up for air as I carried her on my shoulder to where her feet could touch. This was easier thinking about it than doing it, I began to lose my saved air fast I felt as if I wasn't going to make it. I became very scared for my sisters sake and mine, but I pushed a little more to get my sister to safety and made it to the shallow end gasping for air. My grandmother was surprised and shocked, I weakly carried myself to the warm concrete ground and laid there exhausted from the struggle to save my sister from the welcoming waters of the pool. That day I will never forget, it was one of the scariest, bravest moments of my life; I never knew that day I would be saving my sister and I learned I really do care about my sister as much as my own life, that I can push my self to save someone I truly love.
ideas for a narrative essay
- When I found out I was pregnant
- time I got in an argument with my aunts
- when my dog had to be put to sleep
- Having a Serious Relationship at 16
- When I got jumped with Norma and Fernando
- My 9Th grade year at Ventura High School
- Working in the Laboratory at VCMC was the Best
- When my Daughter had to Much Chocolate
- When My Mother Bailed my Boyfriend Out of Jail
- Dancing at Prom 5 Days before i had my baby."
It was during the last days of September when I found out I was pregnant. My Boyfriend was very excited, my mom was surprised, my dad was furious as well as my brothers, and well the aunts and uncles thought it was a lie. I wasn't getting many symptoms, but since it was a planned pregnancy Fernando kept insisting for me to go to the clinic. First I wanted to wait to miss my monthly visitor. Instead I just waited three weeks before I went to the clinic. Sure enough after I gave them the cup of urine the lady in the pink scrubs gave me the news. For some odd reason I was shocked to hear "Mija, your pregnant." At first I stayed quiet and speechless then I just began laughing. Maybe I was nervous, because I didn't know how or when I would tell my parents. So many things ran through my mind while I drove home.
Ideas For Narrative Essay
1. The first time riding my bike without training wheels
2. My first softball game when I was five years old
3. When I fell off my bike and the whole front of my face got scrapped and bruised
4. The first time I drove a car
5. The first time I fell in cheerleading on my head
6. The first time I really liked a boy
7. My first High school dance
8.My first job
9. My first time waxing my legs
10. My first time crashing my mom's car
One of my most memorable stories is my first time riding my bicycle. I was five years old and I first learned how to ride my bike without training wheels. My dad finally took the traing wheels off of my pink little bicycle and I peeled away down the driveway onto the sidewalk .I was super excited because it made me feel older and that I didn't need anybody's assistance.
2. My first softball game when I was five years old
3. When I fell off my bike and the whole front of my face got scrapped and bruised
4. The first time I drove a car
5. The first time I fell in cheerleading on my head
6. The first time I really liked a boy
7. My first High school dance
8.My first job
9. My first time waxing my legs
10. My first time crashing my mom's car
One of my most memorable stories is my first time riding my bicycle. I was five years old and I first learned how to ride my bike without training wheels. My dad finally took the traing wheels off of my pink little bicycle and I peeled away down the driveway onto the sidewalk .I was super excited because it made me feel older and that I didn't need anybody's assistance.
10 stories
1.The time I wrecked my car into a telephone pole and lived.
2.The time my brother fell over on a 25' ladder and walked away without a scratch.
3.The time I fell off a tree 30' high and laughed.
4.The first time I got in a fist fight.
5.The day my Dad died.
6.My first day at Ventura College.
7.When my sons were born.
8.My first car wreck.
9.My first over the fence home run in little league
10. the first time I walked on a roof of a building.
I would like to tell you about the time I wrecked my car into a telephone pole and lived.
The reason I would like to tell you this story is that I feel that when you hear it you might not make the same mistakes I made. This story has situations and decisions that could of been different if I would have thought things out rationally. It is a miracle that I'm here and able
to tell this story. I truly know that when you hear this story you will see the lesson I learned
after the fact. Lastly you have an opportunity to hear something that can change an event for
yourself by making a better decision than I did.
2.The time my brother fell over on a 25' ladder and walked away without a scratch.
3.The time I fell off a tree 30' high and laughed.
4.The first time I got in a fist fight.
5.The day my Dad died.
6.My first day at Ventura College.
7.When my sons were born.
8.My first car wreck.
9.My first over the fence home run in little league
10. the first time I walked on a roof of a building.
I would like to tell you about the time I wrecked my car into a telephone pole and lived.
The reason I would like to tell you this story is that I feel that when you hear it you might not make the same mistakes I made. This story has situations and decisions that could of been different if I would have thought things out rationally. It is a miracle that I'm here and able
to tell this story. I truly know that when you hear this story you will see the lesson I learned
after the fact. Lastly you have an opportunity to hear something that can change an event for
yourself by making a better decision than I did.
"Ideas for Narrative Essay"
1. My best mile time in track
2. The struggles with being a twin-being treated as one person.
3. My high school expectations during summer school.
4. How I got the pain in my knee.
5. How running helps me handle life.
6. My first and so far only job.
7. The day I graduated from high school.
8. How I got my gum busted.
9.My first unexpected worst kiss.
10. How I got my eye poked on the dance floor.
The one I would most likely write about would have to be the struggles with being a twin. The fact that I am always being compared to her and how we are treated unfairly. The experiences I have had with being a twin for eighteen years. I learned a lot just based on how we were treated as one and every ones favorite thing to stare at. The things i got out of being a twin is to be that we are different and i made that statement when i finally got to be me, myself and I.
2. The struggles with being a twin-being treated as one person.
3. My high school expectations during summer school.
4. How I got the pain in my knee.
5. How running helps me handle life.
6. My first and so far only job.
7. The day I graduated from high school.
8. How I got my gum busted.
9.My first unexpected worst kiss.
10. How I got my eye poked on the dance floor.
The one I would most likely write about would have to be the struggles with being a twin. The fact that I am always being compared to her and how we are treated unfairly. The experiences I have had with being a twin for eighteen years. I learned a lot just based on how we were treated as one and every ones favorite thing to stare at. The things i got out of being a twin is to be that we are different and i made that statement when i finally got to be me, myself and I.
Ten Stories
Ten stories that have occurred in my life
1. The trip i will never forget
2.The Sad but joyful funeral
3.End of high school experience
4.The nigh of senior ball
5.Giddy on up as Toby performed
6.The day i broke my personal record at a track event
7.The day i got my license
8.The crazy and flashy lightening storm
9.
It was bright and early as me and my friends prepared to head out to the slops. Windy and snowy it was a harsh day to snow board. Imagine the lifts shifting from left to right. As we departed the lift the visibility was no more then 5 feet. Snow attacking your body almost blowing you over. As I stayed behind to fix my straps my friends took off into the swirling mist of snow. As I made my journey down I found my self facing a decision.Do I go left or right... I found my self going right a decision
that might of cost me my life. Gliding down i saw nothing but pure white snow flakes pelt my face. I over came a soft spot in which I sank like quick sand. Trying not to panic i started thinking about the two power bars I had in my jacket. Trying my best to climb it was nearly impossible. A decision that might of cost me my life.
Lucky for me Ski patrol happen to be wondering of course...
1. The trip i will never forget
2.The Sad but joyful funeral
3.End of high school experience
4.The nigh of senior ball
5.Giddy on up as Toby performed
6.The day i broke my personal record at a track event
7.The day i got my license
8.The crazy and flashy lightening storm
9.
It was bright and early as me and my friends prepared to head out to the slops. Windy and snowy it was a harsh day to snow board. Imagine the lifts shifting from left to right. As we departed the lift the visibility was no more then 5 feet. Snow attacking your body almost blowing you over. As I stayed behind to fix my straps my friends took off into the swirling mist of snow. As I made my journey down I found my self facing a decision.Do I go left or right... I found my self going right a decision
that might of cost me my life. Gliding down i saw nothing but pure white snow flakes pelt my face. I over came a soft spot in which I sank like quick sand. Trying not to panic i started thinking about the two power bars I had in my jacket. Trying my best to climb it was nearly impossible. A decision that might of cost me my life.
Lucky for me Ski patrol happen to be wondering of course...
10 Stories
1. How physic my best friend and I are.
2. My first day of meeting my 3 best friends/sister was a day i will never forget.
3. My worst High School experience when almost every girl harassed me for no reason.
4. The time at Lake Meade my friend fell down a mountain.
5. How I met my first love.
6. Prom night when my date left me for his ex girlfriend.
7. The day I was the fastest girl 100 meter sprinter at Ventura High.
8. The rainy day i got my licence.
9. My first experience at camp.
10. My first car.
The start of my senior year started off great. My boyfriend and I of a year were going strong and closer than ever. I had never met someone like him. He was different then all the other boys in a way that is hard to explain. He was shy and I was outgoing, we were kinda opposite of each other but at the same time similar, we were both very jealous people and that was not good at all. After one of his football games we had a dance at school we went together and were walking out of that parking lot when one of my old friends who i had been fighting with yelled and said "Mary cheated on you!" Right then he just laughed it off and knew i would never do that to him, cause i wouldn't. A week went past and a huge rumor about me cheating on him was erupting. I was at the mall one day and he called me out of no where yelling at me and eventually breaking up with me. I ran to his house, literally and tried to resolve it but he is the most stubborn person ever. That week at school were had still been hanging out cause we were obviously still in love with each other. He was the type of guy that if someone hurt him he would never forget it, but would try to forget about the person and that's exactly what he did. It was time for the backwards dance and i wanted to go with him , but he had different plans. All of my good friends at school knew how sad i was about me and him. Well i thought they were my friends. He had gone to the dance with one of my good friends, i was crushed. I had lost my best friend, boyfriend, and girlfriends all at one time. I was alone. To make it worse I saw them kiss. After the dance my old friend that was with him came up to me yelling at me for no reason. All i could do was cry and run away. After the dance at school the next day every time one of my old "friends" would walk by me they would say the most hateful thing to me. "No one likes you," "Ew look who it is." It was the hardest thing for me. Knowing that he felt bad for me and would still talk to me but didn't want people knowing. I grew from this situation by becoming the bigger person and knowing that none of these people were worth me getting so upset over. To this day we still talk and I couldn't tell you why.
2. My first day of meeting my 3 best friends/sister was a day i will never forget.
3. My worst High School experience when almost every girl harassed me for no reason.
4. The time at Lake Meade my friend fell down a mountain.
5. How I met my first love.
6. Prom night when my date left me for his ex girlfriend.
7. The day I was the fastest girl 100 meter sprinter at Ventura High.
8. The rainy day i got my licence.
9. My first experience at camp.
10. My first car.
The start of my senior year started off great. My boyfriend and I of a year were going strong and closer than ever. I had never met someone like him. He was different then all the other boys in a way that is hard to explain. He was shy and I was outgoing, we were kinda opposite of each other but at the same time similar, we were both very jealous people and that was not good at all. After one of his football games we had a dance at school we went together and were walking out of that parking lot when one of my old friends who i had been fighting with yelled and said "Mary cheated on you!" Right then he just laughed it off and knew i would never do that to him, cause i wouldn't. A week went past and a huge rumor about me cheating on him was erupting. I was at the mall one day and he called me out of no where yelling at me and eventually breaking up with me. I ran to his house, literally and tried to resolve it but he is the most stubborn person ever. That week at school were had still been hanging out cause we were obviously still in love with each other. He was the type of guy that if someone hurt him he would never forget it, but would try to forget about the person and that's exactly what he did. It was time for the backwards dance and i wanted to go with him , but he had different plans. All of my good friends at school knew how sad i was about me and him. Well i thought they were my friends. He had gone to the dance with one of my good friends, i was crushed. I had lost my best friend, boyfriend, and girlfriends all at one time. I was alone. To make it worse I saw them kiss. After the dance my old friend that was with him came up to me yelling at me for no reason. All i could do was cry and run away. After the dance at school the next day every time one of my old "friends" would walk by me they would say the most hateful thing to me. "No one likes you," "Ew look who it is." It was the hardest thing for me. Knowing that he felt bad for me and would still talk to me but didn't want people knowing. I grew from this situation by becoming the bigger person and knowing that none of these people were worth me getting so upset over. To this day we still talk and I couldn't tell you why.
story ideas
I crashed my truck in to my neighbors car.
I got a ticket for multiple offences on New Years day.
I went to a Steel Pulse concert with my girlfriend.
I was on a Pacific View League champion football team at Oxnard High School.
I watched a car run in to another car.
My mother had brain surgery two times.
I broke my head open and had nine stitches.
Graduated from high school with flying colors.
Went to Catalina Island with four of my friends.
I have been to many of my dads fire stations he has worked at.
My Father has been a fire fighter for 41 years, through out the years he has been at many different fire stations.I have probably visited only half of the stations my dad has worked for.The station I liked visiting the best is his current station 80's, station 80's is on the airport at L.A.X. Going to his many different stations has really influenced me in my career, meeting all the guys and watching what goes on at the fire satation has made me want to be a fire fighter my self.
I got a ticket for multiple offences on New Years day.
I went to a Steel Pulse concert with my girlfriend.
I was on a Pacific View League champion football team at Oxnard High School.
I watched a car run in to another car.
My mother had brain surgery two times.
I broke my head open and had nine stitches.
Graduated from high school with flying colors.
Went to Catalina Island with four of my friends.
I have been to many of my dads fire stations he has worked at.
My Father has been a fire fighter for 41 years, through out the years he has been at many different fire stations.I have probably visited only half of the stations my dad has worked for.The station I liked visiting the best is his current station 80's, station 80's is on the airport at L.A.X. Going to his many different stations has really influenced me in my career, meeting all the guys and watching what goes on at the fire satation has made me want to be a fire fighter my self.
story ideas
I broke my wrist in the front yard.
Some man ran in to me the first day i got my license.
When giants beat the patriots.
When i learned how to play saxophone.
Dad was in the hospital.
Watching the Olympics.
Graduating and not knowing what to do after.
Trip to Texas took forever.
When i got my dads truck stuck in the river bed.
When i was learning how to drive.
I was driving in Oxnard going to Target so I could drop off the car for my Mom. I was getting on to the street where target is at and I saw the man behind me in review mirror we both got on the street at the same time. I was getting into the middle lane to make a left into target i mad a complete stop. I was at a stand still when I felt a big push from the back then I realized I got hit from the back. My sister was in the car with me she told me rite away to call the police. We both got out of the car to see what the damage was, are car wasn't to bad but the man's car was smashed in front. Then the police came to see what happen; we had called my mom before the cops came she said to get a police report. After I moved the car into Target because the car was drivable.
Some man ran in to me the first day i got my license.
When giants beat the patriots.
When i learned how to play saxophone.
Dad was in the hospital.
Watching the Olympics.
Graduating and not knowing what to do after.
Trip to Texas took forever.
When i got my dads truck stuck in the river bed.
When i was learning how to drive.
I was driving in Oxnard going to Target so I could drop off the car for my Mom. I was getting on to the street where target is at and I saw the man behind me in review mirror we both got on the street at the same time. I was getting into the middle lane to make a left into target i mad a complete stop. I was at a stand still when I felt a big push from the back then I realized I got hit from the back. My sister was in the car with me she told me rite away to call the police. We both got out of the car to see what the damage was, are car wasn't to bad but the man's car was smashed in front. Then the police came to see what happen; we had called my mom before the cops came she said to get a police report. After I moved the car into Target because the car was drivable.
Random auto-biography
(All about Me)
Random Auto-Biography
Final draft
Ozzy Marin
S. Boggs English 03
August 21, 2008
I arrived into
This world a
Week before
Halloween on
October 23, 1990.
Born in the beautiful
City of Ventura, California
I have never left my
Home town. I have
Traveled to the highlands
Of Mexico and seen the
Lightning strike trees
Burning them to a crisp.
I’ve departed Mexico
On a plane when the
Sun was just rising.
My father’s disappeared
From my life for seven
Years. My mother has
Raised me herself.
The first girl I kissed
I do not love. I’ve gone
To preschool and
Loved it. I’ve rode the
School bus to school
Up until eleventh grade.
I played soccer during
Lunch all through
Middle school. I went
Through 3 girlfriends
In middle school. I’ve
Felt snowflakes hit
My face constantly.
The stomach flu has
Visited me for 3 days
Straight. I’ve entered
High school not
Knowing what to
Expect. The waves of
Hawaii have greeted
Me. I’ve been scared
For bears to attack
Me while I camped
In the wilderness.
My family has kept
Me company whenever
I am lonely. Off of
A tree branch I’ve
Fallen and hit my head.
I’ve enjoyed eating
Three hundred licorice
In two days. I have
Fallen asleep as late
As seven in the
Morning. I have
Seen the happy faces
Of my family and
Friends as I graduated
High school. I’ve
Discovered a girlfriend
That I don’t ever want
To rid of. I’ve
Attended my fathers
Funeral, the saddest
Of all events for me in life.
Random Auto-Biography
Final draft
Ozzy Marin
S. Boggs English 03
August 21, 2008
I arrived into
This world a
Week before
Halloween on
October 23, 1990.
Born in the beautiful
City of Ventura, California
I have never left my
Home town. I have
Traveled to the highlands
Of Mexico and seen the
Lightning strike trees
Burning them to a crisp.
I’ve departed Mexico
On a plane when the
Sun was just rising.
My father’s disappeared
From my life for seven
Years. My mother has
Raised me herself.
The first girl I kissed
I do not love. I’ve gone
To preschool and
Loved it. I’ve rode the
School bus to school
Up until eleventh grade.
I played soccer during
Lunch all through
Middle school. I went
Through 3 girlfriends
In middle school. I’ve
Felt snowflakes hit
My face constantly.
The stomach flu has
Visited me for 3 days
Straight. I’ve entered
High school not
Knowing what to
Expect. The waves of
Hawaii have greeted
Me. I’ve been scared
For bears to attack
Me while I camped
In the wilderness.
My family has kept
Me company whenever
I am lonely. Off of
A tree branch I’ve
Fallen and hit my head.
I’ve enjoyed eating
Three hundred licorice
In two days. I have
Fallen asleep as late
As seven in the
Morning. I have
Seen the happy faces
Of my family and
Friends as I graduated
High school. I’ve
Discovered a girlfriend
That I don’t ever want
To rid of. I’ve
Attended my fathers
Funeral, the saddest
Of all events for me in life.
narrative essay defenition
A narrative essay is a story that tells about an experience through time that has happened to the writer. They are usually written in cronological order from what happened first to what happened last. A narrative essay usually has a meaning and a lesson learned.
Random Autobiography
I was the after Fourth of July celebration. My first day of life was in the Ventura County Hospital. My Father, full of wisdom, hard working, and funny. My Mother, shes always right, quiet and resourceful. My Brothers, barging into loud and annoying, are the biggest help with dealing with problems. My school, a new campus to me, is bigger and different from high school. I plan to get good grades, its expected of me , i need to reach my goal. i want to become a fashion designer, we need real sizes. I have seen the most beautiful beaches; the sand was white and warm, so many shades of blue. I wish I could be more confident person; I don't want to depend on others.
In Class Assignment
New today and due by the end of class:
Make a list of stories you may want to tell in a narrative essay. We are going to write this essay later this week and next week. Right now we are trying to decide what story we are going to tell. Make a list of ten stories you might tell.
Then choose one and answer the following questions in paragraph form:
What happened and what did you learn?
Post this response to the blog and label it "Ideas for Narrative Essay"
Make a list of stories you may want to tell in a narrative essay. We are going to write this essay later this week and next week. Right now we are trying to decide what story we are going to tell. Make a list of ten stories you might tell.
Then choose one and answer the following questions in paragraph form:
What happened and what did you learn?
Post this response to the blog and label it "Ideas for Narrative Essay"
Random Autobiography
On December 22, 1989 I entered the world. It was a cold winter morning. Throughout my life I have seen many things, lived through rough experiences; getting jumped by 10 females for defending my love. Being followed by a scary man wasn’t fun. Learning to forgive is a challenge for me, I’ll try but my heart won’t let me. I have too much pride to let go of things. Even though I get hurt love is all I ever give. Maybe, I even loved people who didn’t deserve it, like my dad’s family. My father a 43 year old man acts and thinks like a 20 year old. He’s the man I admire the most. I understand he’s not perfect, but a great father he’s always been to me. My mother is a very understanding, loving person who never judges anyone by their mistakes. I knew she would accept my boyfriend, but to love him like her son that I would never have guessed, from getting him a lawyer to bailing him out. She cries for him like she cries for me. I’ll always have my mom’s back because she is my best friend. Even my dad’s sister almost got a brick thrown in her face for insulting my precious mother. My baby’s dad came into my life on March of 2006; he became my angel the one who protects and guides me through hard times. I miss his warm embrace. He would always make me laugh when I was angry, and he always knew how to cheer me up when I was feeling unworthy. Whether he’s released or not I’ll still be his girl, because he never left me when things got tough. I kicked him out, punched him, and offended him, but all he did was hold me down to say to me he loves me. He got me pregnant at 16 and it was great, it made me mellow in some way. We were full of happiness as that little tiny thing grew inside me. People talked and said bad things but I never cared. It’s my life and I’ll always do as I please. Yeah, they doubted me but I proved them wrong by graduating early, and still being a good mom. Nayeli Aileene, the little girl who makes me want to bang my head on the door is my PRIDE and JOY. She’s only on and already drives me crazy when she throws herself on the floor, she screams and shouts until she gets her way. My baby girl knows her mommy will do and give anything to see her smile. I changed my bad ways for her and I thank her for changing my path in this crazy world. Outgoing, happy, crazy, & optimistic are a few words that best describe me. I’m a nice girl, but do me wrong and you’ll wish you never met me. 2 brothers I care for and 2 brothers I hope the ground would eat. One sister, who depends on me, makes me feel as if she’s younger than me. I know for a fact my family loves me, because if they didn’t they wouldn’t do all the things they do for me. I enjoy playing sports with my little brother and drawing because it takes my stress away. I also enjoy dancing the nights away. Anyone that knows me knows I enjoy my life and live happily, because when people talk about me all I ever do is laugh and say don’t hate me cause you’re not me. God’s creations amaze me every little living thing is a blessing. Until my life comes to an end a smile on my face I guarantee you’ll always see, and all the people who did me wrong those will fear me.
What is a Narrative essay?
A narrative essay is a way to tell someone a story of your life or a story from your point of view. You must decide what topic you are going to write about and then you need to brainstorm to make sure you have all your elements together. People write narrative essays because it’s a way to explain in detail something of their past. To write a narrative essay you need to have a plot, characters, a setting, climax, and an ending. This type of essay is to make a deep emotional impression on the reader through the method of using real and sensory details as the author of the paper. When writing a narrative essay you can talk about anything you think is interesting. For example about a pet, family, something you don’t like things you agree on or disagree on, and so on.
narritive essay
What is a a narritive essay a narritive essay is a writting by one person. The elements of a narritive essay are the essay are usually in first person. Narrtive essays express the feelings about their opinion of the writting. People write them so they can get their opinion out. Some of the features of a narrative essay are they have a introduction, should describe people and places, and they are usually are writen in first person.
Negative Essay
1.What is a negative essay?
A essay based on bad things thing that have happen. Or times that the subject is nothing but bad thing!!!!!!!
2. What are the elements or characteristics of a narrative essay?
Narrative essay are detailed experiences that changed how you felt or acted.
3. What do narrative essays do?
Story by providing the references which will support and defend your views and opinions.
4. Why do people write them?
People write narrative essays because they are trying to describe something that is close to them or that relates to them. They really want to explain specific things that have happened.
5. What are some features of a narrative essay?The story should have an introduction that clearly shows what kind of essay it is and it should have a conclusion that gets the point across. . The author should describe the character, the mood, and what happened in detail. You can have a dialogue as long as you know how to punctuate it correctly and as long as you avoid using too much.
A essay based on bad things thing that have happen. Or times that the subject is nothing but bad thing!!!!!!!
2. What are the elements or characteristics of a narrative essay?
Narrative essay are detailed experiences that changed how you felt or acted.
3. What do narrative essays do?
Story by providing the references which will support and defend your views and opinions.
4. Why do people write them?
People write narrative essays because they are trying to describe something that is close to them or that relates to them. They really want to explain specific things that have happened.
5. What are some features of a narrative essay?The story should have an introduction that clearly shows what kind of essay it is and it should have a conclusion that gets the point across. . The author should describe the character, the mood, and what happened in detail. You can have a dialogue as long as you know how to punctuate it correctly and as long as you avoid using too much.
Narrative essay
What is a narrative essay. Narrative essays are stories told from a defined point of view and very often its told from the authors point of view. the main characteristics of a narrative essay and the key things to having a good narrative essay are making sure that the essay is told from a strong person point of view, make sure that your point has support use exclusive details that are precise and most of all make sure it isn't boring. the main purpose of a narrative essay is to describe something with great detail and vailde points of view to not bore the reader.Narrative essays are normally written in first person using a third person dialouge such as he she or it the details use in a narrative essay should be dominate concrete and unified to back up n convey there point.
Narrative Essay
A narrative essay is when someone is telling a story, based on things they experianced. A narrative essay can also be a fiction story. The story should contian stuff that you experianced or have just like any other essays a plot or climax. The narrative essay basically explians the way you feel. They also include if any lessons have been learned through the process its just your everyday life experiances.
Monday, August 25, 2008
Narrative Essay
1. A narrative essay is a written story.
2. Some of the elements of a narrative essay are personal experiences interpreted in many ways from a first or third point of view.
3. Narrative essays tell you about personal stories or feelings.
4. People write narrative essays to communicate their readers personal thoughts.
5. Some features of the narrative essay are the introduction, this to explain the topic; the body, where you post some specific details; and the conclusion, this last requisit to share their point of view or opinion from the story narrated.
2. Some of the elements of a narrative essay are personal experiences interpreted in many ways from a first or third point of view.
3. Narrative essays tell you about personal stories or feelings.
4. People write narrative essays to communicate their readers personal thoughts.
5. Some features of the narrative essay are the introduction, this to explain the topic; the body, where you post some specific details; and the conclusion, this last requisit to share their point of view or opinion from the story narrated.
Narritive essay
A narrative essay is an essay that simply identify s a story. Such as personal experiences.
Commonly people write these to express a story in which they can relate to or tell from secound hand. Some elements refer similarly to a story in which uses plot, Character, setting , climax and ending. One main ideal to writing a narrative essay is to describe something or a story as mentioned. Some features are to include precise details. Another would be to use dialogue. Where as the at the beginning there should always be a introduction. And as closing there should be a conclusion.
Commonly people write these to express a story in which they can relate to or tell from secound hand. Some elements refer similarly to a story in which uses plot, Character, setting , climax and ending. One main ideal to writing a narrative essay is to describe something or a story as mentioned. Some features are to include precise details. Another would be to use dialogue. Where as the at the beginning there should always be a introduction. And as closing there should be a conclusion.
Tuesday's Homework
1. What is a narrative essay?
An essay that tells a story. Most essays of this type spring from an event or experience in the writer’s life.
2. What are the elements or characteristics of a narrative esssay?
Narrative essay describes detailed experiences that changed how you felt, thought, or acted. The form of a narrative is like to a story in that it describes how your character feels by "showing" through his actions, rather than by coming out, and "telling" your readers.
3. What do narrative essays do?
A narrative essay is one that you do more of relating a fact or a story by providing the references which will support and defend your views and opinions.
4. Why do people write them?
People write narrative essayas because they are trying to describe something that is personal about ones own self.
5. What are some features of a narrative essay?
The story should have an introduction that clearly indicates what kind of narrative essay it is (an event or recurring activity, a personal experience, or an observation), and it should have a conclusion that makes a point. The essay should include anecdotes. The author should describe the person, the scene, or the event in some detail. It's okay to include dialogue as long as you know how to punctuate it correctly and as long as you avoid using too much. The occasion or person described must be suggestive in that your description and thoughts lead the reader to reflect on the human experience. The point of view in narrative essays is usually first person. The writing in your essay should be lively and show some style. Try to describe ideas and events in new and in different ideas.
An essay that tells a story. Most essays of this type spring from an event or experience in the writer’s life.
2. What are the elements or characteristics of a narrative esssay?
Narrative essay describes detailed experiences that changed how you felt, thought, or acted. The form of a narrative is like to a story in that it describes how your character feels by "showing" through his actions, rather than by coming out, and "telling" your readers.
3. What do narrative essays do?
A narrative essay is one that you do more of relating a fact or a story by providing the references which will support and defend your views and opinions.
4. Why do people write them?
People write narrative essayas because they are trying to describe something that is personal about ones own self.
5. What are some features of a narrative essay?
The story should have an introduction that clearly indicates what kind of narrative essay it is (an event or recurring activity, a personal experience, or an observation), and it should have a conclusion that makes a point. The essay should include anecdotes. The author should describe the person, the scene, or the event in some detail. It's okay to include dialogue as long as you know how to punctuate it correctly and as long as you avoid using too much. The occasion or person described must be suggestive in that your description and thoughts lead the reader to reflect on the human experience. The point of view in narrative essays is usually first person. The writing in your essay should be lively and show some style. Try to describe ideas and events in new and in different ideas.
Narrative Essay Definition
A narrative essay is a essay is when you are telling a story. Narrative essays are mostly told from an authors point of view. The elements in a narrative essay is that it is usually written in first or third person, they rely on concrete and sensory details to convey their point of view. A narrative essay represents important changes, contrasts, or conflicts and also creates tention. Narative essays described detailed experiences that change how you felt, thought, or acted. People write them to illustrate the readers importance and influence the experience has on the author.
Random Autobiography
Michelle Salas
S. Boggs
English VO3
22 August 2008
I was born on March 15, 1990. In Ventura, California at the hospital. I have seen my father’s face when he gets off of a big fire as he had worked on for three days straight. I have loved this guys for three years two months, he’s great! My father is a fire fighter for Ventura County. My mother works with special needs at the ARC located in Santa Paula. My first kiss was given to me by a person I didn’t want to have a relationship with at first, then well you know. I want to merry my high school sweet heart, I met him in a different city and that first day I met him was the day he received his first real kiss. I have felt as if sometimes like no one listens to me. My best friends will always be there, that is if I’m not too far. My siblings are two brothers their names are Andrew and Danny. The high school I graduated from was Santa Paula High School. My grandma is the best all around as far as personality and a cook. My cousin and I have the same personality and are a lot alike. My job smells like crab and the customers are rude. I love my hobbies which are horse back ridding and photography, I have grown up with horses all my life and photography comes naturally. Every year I make a new years resolution, but I can never keep the commitment. I have never bungee jumped and never will. I plan to one day get the career I have always dreamed of to help women see their unborn child on a monitor and capture that precious moment . My wish I could wish for is to have a big house for my future family. Everyday I take a shower and I like it.
S. Boggs
English VO3
22 August 2008
Random Autobiography
I was born on March 15, 1990. In Ventura, California at the hospital. I have seen my father’s face when he gets off of a big fire as he had worked on for three days straight. I have loved this guys for three years two months, he’s great! My father is a fire fighter for Ventura County. My mother works with special needs at the ARC located in Santa Paula. My first kiss was given to me by a person I didn’t want to have a relationship with at first, then well you know. I want to merry my high school sweet heart, I met him in a different city and that first day I met him was the day he received his first real kiss. I have felt as if sometimes like no one listens to me. My best friends will always be there, that is if I’m not too far. My siblings are two brothers their names are Andrew and Danny. The high school I graduated from was Santa Paula High School. My grandma is the best all around as far as personality and a cook. My cousin and I have the same personality and are a lot alike. My job smells like crab and the customers are rude. I love my hobbies which are horse back ridding and photography, I have grown up with horses all my life and photography comes naturally. Every year I make a new years resolution, but I can never keep the commitment. I have never bungee jumped and never will. I plan to one day get the career I have always dreamed of to help women see their unborn child on a monitor and capture that precious moment . My wish I could wish for is to have a big house for my future family. Everyday I take a shower and I like it.
Narrative Essay Defintion
Narrative Essays use different elements to make their point in a story. They for the most part look like short stories rather than a traditional essay. Authors use Narrative Essays to tell stories or events that have happened to them in their lives, or the essay can be about your own life experients.When reading the essay your getting a understanding of the writers past. They neither have to be fiction or be about a persons life events. When reading a Narrative Essay you are telling the story in a really defined point of view to try to feel the emotions and other feeling in the essay. Many of them have vivid verbs and modifiers to describe the details in the story. Sometimes they might even have a dialogue.
A narrative essay is a piece of writing that recreates an experience through time. A narrative essay can be based on one of your own experiences, either past or present, or it can be based on the experiences of someone else. In addition to telling a story, a narrative essay also communicates a main idea or a lesson learned.
Narrative essay
A narrative essay is a way to expository writing a eassy way to think and write about yourself.
a narrative essay are told from a defined point of view, vervs are precisely centrated. narative essay are based in facts.
a narrative essay are told from a defined point of view, vervs are precisely centrated. narative essay are based in facts.
Narrative Essay Definition
When an author writes a narrative essay he or she is telling a story. The stories main point can be found in the opening sentence or in the last sentence of the opening paragraph. Narrative essays are told usually form the authors define point of view, so it contains felling and sensory details that get the reader interested in the story. People write these essays to talk about real life experiences experienced by them or by someone else. In addition to telling a story the essay can often state lessons or ideas learned.
Narrative Essay Definition
A narrative essay is a type of writing that is made up of an experience through time. A narrative essay can be based on one of your own experiences, either past or present, or it can be based on the experiences of someone else. A narrative essay also tells a story and or states a lesson learned from the writer. These essays give people the right to express themselves in a form of writing. People write them to tell a story of their own experience. Narrative essays often feature details of the writer's own point of view.
Narrative Essay Definition
A narrative essay is a paragraph that tells a story for a particular reason. They are written in a series of events in order that they have occurred. Narrative essays give an interesting way to combined background information into several different essay types. People write narrative essays because they give us an opportunity to think and write about ourselves, and they help give a different outlook to things it may lead too. Some of the features that the narrative essay has the readers often seeing them as a taste of reality, or an abstract discussion.
Narrative essay definition
When you write a narrative essay, you are telling a story.Usually when you write a narrative you write it about yourself.The essay is usually about a point or sumthing you are trying to solve and the essay sums it up.Narrative essays are layed out in a 5 paragragh format such as intro,body1,body2,body3,and conclusion.The intro and conclusion are suposed to be conneceted in a few ways.
A narrative essay is a piece of writing that tells about some one's experience and will usually make a point or has a lessoned learned. It is most often written in the first person point of view but can be written in second or third point of view. A narrative essay relys on concrete details to show their point of view and will usually have the events in chronological order.
Narrative Essay Description
A narrative essay is a very descriptive perception of an event or as to describe something.
The essay is written in at least Five paragraphs and college students usually confuse this kind of an essay for an actual college essay.
The characteristics usually are; a plot, a character or more, a setting, a climax, and the ending. Characteristics help explain and support the story. People write them to summarize their story on an event using every detail possible. Narrative essays are usually featured in book reports and the writer usually expresses his or her feelings through verbs and adjectives. Basically the narrative essay is just telling your very best story in words in order to keep the reader interested.
The essay is written in at least Five paragraphs and college students usually confuse this kind of an essay for an actual college essay.
The characteristics usually are; a plot, a character or more, a setting, a climax, and the ending. Characteristics help explain and support the story. People write them to summarize their story on an event using every detail possible. Narrative essays are usually featured in book reports and the writer usually expresses his or her feelings through verbs and adjectives. Basically the narrative essay is just telling your very best story in words in order to keep the reader interested.
Narrative essay definition
A narrative essay is something that tells a story. They give you a chance to write and think about yourself and your own personal feelings. A narrative essay tells a story about something from ones own perspective. People write them to express and share with others their own experiences. Narrative essays make and support a point, are filled with precise detail and may use dialogue as well.
Iraqi leader insists on deadline for troop pullout
Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki wants all foreign soldiers out of Iraq by 2011. The U.S. agreed to a broad pullout of U.S. soldiers by 2011. President Bush has always been against the pullout of U.S. soldiers from Iraq but hows now agreed that a set date should be created. Al-Maliki says he couldn't possibly grant open immunity to Iraqis or foreigners. At least 4,147 U.S. military people in Iraq have died since the war first started in March of 2003.
Iraq demands deadline for pullout of all US troops
BAGHDAD (AP) -- Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki said on Monday, "on security agreements could be reached unless it included a specific deadline for a pullout of American troops". President Bush still resists a timetable for pulling out even under heavy pressure from American deaths. So far no new date has been set. I think we should pull out, because this war is costing us to much money and we need the money we are spending to pay off our national debts.
Iraq demands....
Iraq demands to pullout trops to US... they say the Us trops have to be pullout before the end of 2011...
Troop Pullout for 2011
U.S. and Iraqi officials made an agreement which included a huge pullout of soldiers by the end of 2011 with U.S. force still behind in training and advising the Iraqi security forces. Although the Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki is still not satisfied with the arrangments, but he will cooperate with the U.S.
Tropical Storm Fay
A tropical storm hit on Moday from Louisiana to Georgia causing terrible flash flood warnings and other possible dangerous warnings. Forcasting anounced heavy raining and raging winds, but in their case rain is needed. Farmers have been waiting for this rain and have been trying to get out of the drought that has been with them for a while. All the way from Louisiana to Carolinas into Virginia has been drought area. Florida has be damaged by this tropical storm named "Fay" home owners stayed home cleaning on Monday by the terrible damage.
Homework for Tuesday
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Fay's remnants spread rain, storm across South
I read that article and it was about a big storm that would cause flooding and tornados from Lousiana to Georgia. In a way it was good because farm lands need water in order for their crops could grow. Moreover, manyy people had to ask for help because it destroyed homes. Some people were helped but most did not get the same assistance. Fay, the storm, has been blamed for 13 deaths in the United States, 11 in Florida and one in Alabama and in Georgia. There are funds to help the people get back in their feet and repair what was destroyed.
Iraq demands deadline for pullout of all US troops
This article was regarding when U.S. soilders will leave Iraq. They say by 2011 they will all be out and not one soilder will be remaning. President Bush says that there is no exac time that they will be pulling troops out. They are optomistic that Iraq and U.S. can reach a mutural aggreement. The agreement had been scheduled to be concluded by the end of last month. Noone really knows when this aggreement will take place beacuse it keeps getting pused back.
I do not know much about our troops in Iraq but my personal opnion is that we should get them out as soon as we can, unless there is a good reason that we need to stay there and fight. But as of right now i belive too many are over there and are loosing there lives everyday. I understand that we need to stand up for our country but we need to do it in a peace going way.
I do not know much about our troops in Iraq but my personal opnion is that we should get them out as soon as we can, unless there is a good reason that we need to stay there and fight. But as of right now i belive too many are over there and are loosing there lives everyday. I understand that we need to stand up for our country but we need to do it in a peace going way.
Iraq demands deadline for pullout of all US troops
Last week US and Iraqi officials agreed to a pullout of combat forces by the end of 2011. They also agreed that a US force was going to remain their to advise the Iraqi Security Forces. Al-Maliki's remarks on Monday suggested that the Iraqi Government is not satisfied with the agreement anymore. The Iraqi's want all US soilders to be out by 2011 no matter the circumstances at the time. One of the two said a breakthrough was not expected before next month.
lawsuit
The Associated Press has settled its intellectual property lawsuit against Moreover Technologies Inc. and VeriSign Inc. Even though it has taken them a while to do this lawsuit against these companies the people finally did what they had to do. In my opionion i hate blogging they should have just dropped the case instead of going on for a hlaf a year. They started this case in December of 07.
Hiliary Clinton
Presidential candidates Hilliary Clinton and Barack Obama are working on a project to boost Hilliary's votes in the race. The project is called roll call and the officials in the project are saying that Wednesday night will be the start of the state by state roll call where voters will either cast their vote for either Clinton or Obama .The voting would be cut off in several states starting with New York where Hilliary would call for a unanimous backing for Obama. Hilliary has stated that she will do everything in her power to back up Obama .
Iraq demands pullout....
Last week Iraqi and U.S officials agreed to pullout all American troop from Iraq by the end of 2011.....finalyy afeter many years Bush has finally agreed to pullout troops... he was resisting since 2003. i think this is a good idea and maybe a start to ending the war.
Iraqi demands deadline for pullout of all U.S. troops
Last week, U.S. and Iraqi officials said the two sides had agreed to a schedule which included a terrible pullout of combat forces by the end of 2011 with a residual U.S. force remaining behind to continue training and advising the Iraqi security forces.
But al-Maliki's remarks Monday suggested that the Iraqi government is still not satisfied with that arrangement. An aide to the prime minister said Monday that Iraq remained aware that the last American soldier must leave Iraq by the end of 2011 regardless of conditions at the time.
I believe that U.S. soldiers should start thinking and planning about the worrie that iraqi minister spoke saying that he wants U.S. soldiers out of iraq no matter what the circumstances are by 2011.
But al-Maliki's remarks Monday suggested that the Iraqi government is still not satisfied with that arrangement. An aide to the prime minister said Monday that Iraq remained aware that the last American soldier must leave Iraq by the end of 2011 regardless of conditions at the time.
I believe that U.S. soldiers should start thinking and planning about the worrie that iraqi minister spoke saying that he wants U.S. soldiers out of iraq no matter what the circumstances are by 2011.
Fay's remnants spread rain, storms across South
The Article i read was an article regarding the Tropical storm Fay. As reporters stated This particular storm had broughten heavy rains and winds. Causing the threat of possible flash floods and tornadooes. As some stated the rain could be a good thing, where farmers would benefit due to the long term drought. This particular storm effected the south region. Such as areas in Alabama, Mississippi, eastern Louisiana and Tennessee. Currently Fay has sadly tooken 13 lifes in the U.S
Personally i believe the south is a dangerous region. Due to the fact of many sever tropical storms!
Personally i believe the south is a dangerous region. Due to the fact of many sever tropical storms!
response to ap news
George Bush and the Iraqi agreed tentatively that all american troops should return back to the US by 2011. Although the Iraqi government is not satisfied with the arrangement.
Fay's remnants spread rain, storms across South
what is happening with this world?
economic, social, and nature changes are taking place in this 2008. War and Global Warming are the main topics that have been afecting in our lifes. Lousianaand Georgia have been afected by storms. making the life for those people exept Farmers they are benefited by this weather events until certain point.
economic, social, and nature changes are taking place in this 2008. War and Global Warming are the main topics that have been afecting in our lifes. Lousianaand Georgia have been afected by storms. making the life for those people exept Farmers they are benefited by this weather events until certain point.
Iraq demands deadline for pullout of all US troops
Prime Minister Nouri al-maliki said that there is no security agreementwith the United States unless it has a deadline for the withdrawel of all ameican troops. United States and iraqi officials have agreed to pull out combat forces by the end of 2011. Ali-Maliki is still not satisfied with the agreement.
Democrats
Barack Obama is going to speak and show days before the campaign things that he has found on John McCain. In the hopes of catching the people interest. Obama is on his way to Iowa for his campaign. Clinton made her first convention appearance at a breakfast for New York for the Democrats. In the hopes of pull the New York crowd. Clinton says that McCain wants to divid us as a people and he will just bring us further down.
"Me, Myself, and I"
Anthony Herrera Herrera1
S. Boggs
English 03: Basic
22, August 2008
“Me, Myself, and I”
I grew up watching my big brothers go through the fads. In a big truck from morning until night
Worked my dad, While Mom stayed home making sure we all had. Muhammed Ali was pretty
Rad.. fun at school, fun at home I thought was all I had. A man named Sugar Ray Leonard
Became the fastest in the ring, the first breaths of my sons would change the way I’d sing.
O. J. Simpson was on the news playing his last card, that’s about the time I started walking the
Yard. A couple of wrong turns and I got lost, I still remember how much it cost. High School
Was fun going out to the prom, I still have the pictures of Me and my sons mom. My favorite
Brother was always “Mike,” He even taught me how to ride a bike. The choices I make aren’t
Right, the wardens ship was ran very tight. My Dad was the best friend I had, watching him take
His last breath made me very sad. I remember looking out my cell, wondering just how I ended
Up in this hell. Searching and searching my heart all day, Until I decided to pray. My sons have
Grown up so big today, I hope they don’t go that way. Today my heart is filled with joy, I’m like
Kid with a toy. I’m excited to see what life will bring, now that God has taught me how to sing
kennedy at the Democratic convention
In todays news kennedy appear, may speak at Democratic Convention, many people say that this is going to help Obama gain more votes with kennedys help. obama saw a picture of MCcain and bush hugging and was aganist it. A spokes person that was at the convention believes that the Obama and Cliniton will come together and will give him a stronger way to win, i think that this is a lie and that it will give him a weaker run and that it will give mccain an advantage. Obama and his new running mate stated that they have been "family" since way back when. Mccan feels that he has what it takes, and feels that Kennedy will have a huge impact when he comes to the other concentions in the comming weeks.
Kennedy to Appear my speak at convention
Kennedy prepared to speak at the Democratic National Convention. While Obama campaigned in Iowa this ad just mocked rival John McCain with President Bush and failed economic policies. Meanwhile Clinton made her first convention apperance at a breakfast for New York Democrats, at this breakfast she "took her own shot at McCain." She says the McCain campaigne is trying to divide us. She does not agree on comercials and adds he has put on.
Fay's remnants spread rain, storms across South
The flood has gone through many areas and has affected many of the peoples live. The death of many have been blamed towards fay. The fact that all they wanted was a little rain for soil as many farmers would like it has caused a flood and is a struggle for many. The water they just wanted was for the drought that they had and got more than what they asked for. This tragedy, bush claims that florida is one of the counties distaster areas.
olympic story
Alot of people dont believe in fortune tellers but Prapawadee Jaroenrattanatarakoon did! The fortune tellers told Prapawadee that if he changed his name he would win a gold medal in the olympics.Prapawadee changed his name to Henry Cejudo and then he won an olympic gold metal!
Tuesday, August 5, 2008
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